Research topic:Information and communication technology in education
Sources:from official journals.
Research Paper Feedback Guide
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Skills
Points Possible
Draft Points
Draft Comments
Revision Points
Revision Comments
Content
▪ Introduction is interesting and appropriate, includes research question
▪ Clear and thoughtful thesis statement
▪ Background paragraph defines terms, prepares reader for the paper
▪ Body paragraphs include: topic sentences, supporting evidence (quotes), concluding sentences
▪ Counterargument is well thought out and refutation is clear and related to counter argument (with evidence/quotes)
▪ Conclusion includes a brief summary and wraps up the paper with mirror, challenge, or implications for the future
40%
Organization
▪ Ordering of support is appropriate (saves the best reason for last)
▪ Coherence (use of transition techniques between paragraphs and transitions between ideas; everything clearly ties back to the thesis statement)
10%
Format/Citations
▪ Accurate citation of sources
▪ Gives credit to original source when quoting a quote
▪ Quotes integrated into text smoothly
▪ Quotes adequately explained/have context
▪ APA formatting is correct and consistent
▪ Reference page is in proper format and acurrate
15%
Grammar Mechanics/ Sentence Structure
▪ Verbs
▪ Nouns
▪ Prepositions/articles
▪ Adjective/adverbs
▪ Spelling/punctuation/capitalization
▪ Sentence variety
▪ Word choice
▪ Tone
35%
Total
100
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